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:iconshamasrodriguez:
I really like this drawing. It has great detail and is mostly proportioned well. One thing I noticed was the head is a bit small for the body. Just some constructive critique.

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:iconohimseeinstars:
Thank you! Yeah, that was definitely one of my problems from the getgo. I tried making it bigger a few times, but I just liked the face too much! Thank you so much! :)

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:iconshamasrodriguez:
i have the same problem.... my suggestion is keep the original...then use that to go into photoshop and constrain enlarge the head on the neck. So you have the original and the retouched.
just an idea.
:iconohimseeinstars:
Yeah, i've definitely thought about it, but I'd rather upload my original image without editing it. The flaws almost make it my own, you know? I mean of course I want to work out the flaws and make it look as best as I can, but now that I've signed the drawing, it's complete and I won't photoshop it, you know?

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:iconshamasrodriguez:
My suggestion was to upload both.

But of course, I understand the beauty in flaws. I embrace them. You did fantastic work. It was only a suggestion.

Keep it up, and I will probably put you on watch.

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:iconohimseeinstars:
Ah, gotcha. Well thanks for the critique and suggestions!

Thank you so much. I appreciate it! <3

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:iconshamasrodriguez:
no problem homie, just keep up the excellent work.
:icondonataslt:
not bad indeed. But I missing midtones on the upper part of the figure.

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Apr 1, 2009, 2:07:55 AM

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