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:iconohimseeinstars:
I have to say your composition is pretty good, but the top of the wing and the feathers are almost tangent to the border and generally you want a little space in between.

Figure looks really good. You keep improving on proportions and depth in your drawings every time I see them. His face and hair look very believable. The jacket may be a bit flat, but it looks good none-the-less. Line quality keeps getting better and better, but the line of the chin is a tad dark. I would suggest making the line at it's darkest at the point of the chin instead of on the sides. Usually darker parts are what you want the viewer to look at, so the sides of the face make it a little distracting.

Keep up the good work, you're improving at a ridiculous speed, really. <3
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:iconcapputea:
Thank you so much! seriously, this really helps alot. I'm just wondering how I would give the jacket more depth you know? Like I want to add more texture to it and make it seem like its a jacket and not just something to cover him.

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:iconohimseeinstars:
I'm not too sure about textures and whatnot quite yet, but I think you just need a little more contrast. The darkest darks should be close to black with a jacket that dark, you know?

And no problem about the critique. I love this new thing DA has. :)

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:iconcapputea:
So should I use like a solid black or just something close to it? xD

I know! It's really helpful for me xD

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